proofread/review test.mdwn
Originally created by @CyrilBrulebois on #16240 (Redmine)
While preparing 3.11, I noticed the “It’s design” typo in
wiki/src/contribute/release_process/test.mdwn
so I took another look
later.
Also “such is” → “such as”.
I’ve noticed the ifconfig | grep inet | grep -v inet6 | cut -d" " -f2 | tail -n1
instruction which can’t work since we don’t have net-tools
in Tails, and I’ve checked that there’s no ifconfig
wrapper. I’m
getting an empty string on stretch anyway…
What about this? ip a|awk '/inet / {print $2}' | tail -n1
We get an
extra subnet mask though, e.g. 10.0.2.15/24
but 1. it can be sed
’d
out, and 2. that’s still better than “ifconfig: command not found”?
Also:
1. Then check that email's headers once received, especially the
`Received:` one.
one→ones? (There are likely several of them.)
Also I don’t really understand what is meant here: « * Call the upgrader must be called, […] ”
Also double is here: “The goal is is to check”.
I’m attaching a partial patch for the issues that seem obvious to me.