GitLab

As a start:

• "contextual identities" sounds a bit like jargon to me.
  • Maybe our example in the 1st paragraph could be improved.
  • Maybe we could find a better title for this section.
  • Maybe we should talk about activitites that you really don't want to be related if things go bad.
• "First, because Tor tends to reuse the same circuits, for example, within the same browsing session" could be improved.
  • Nowadays Tor Browser has top-level isolation: visits to different websites are forced to use different circuits.
  • We should either be more precise or drop this.
• "browsing requests" is jargon.
• "If you are facing a global adversary as described above, it might then also be in a position to do this correlation." is already covered elsewhere. See also #17869 (closed) for ongoing work.
• "security hole" → "security vulnerability". See https://tails.boum.org/contribute/how/documentation/style_guide/#vulnerability.
• "information about your session could be leaked": could we find an example to make this more clear?
• "shutdown and restart Tails": That's not enough to protect from the second thread is the user has a Persistent Storage.
  • We should update the entire section to take into account the Persistent Storage: if people are using the Persistent Storage, they should have different Tails USB sticks for each identity or activity.