Commit dafd23aa authored by Tails developers's avatar Tails developers
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Improve phrasing

- Reuse formulation
- Say "hardware" instead of "material"
- Say "start" instead of "boot"
parent ccf82a47
...@@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ Device](http://pcsupport.about.com/od/tipstricks/ht/bootusbflash.htm). ...@@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ Device](http://pcsupport.about.com/od/tipstricks/ht/bootusbflash.htm).
If you have problems accessing the BIOS, try to read [pendrivelinux.com: How to If you have problems accessing the BIOS, try to read [pendrivelinux.com: How to
Access BIOS](http://www.pendrivelinux.com/how-to-access-bios/). Access BIOS](http://www.pendrivelinux.com/how-to-access-bios/).
Using a virtualization software Problems starting Tails?
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[[See the corresponding documentation.|advanced_topics/virtualization]] Read our specific [[reporting guidelines when Tails does not
start|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting/tails_does_not_start]].
Problems booting? Using a virtualization software
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If you have problems booting Tails, please read the [[following [[See the corresponding documentation.|advanced_topics/virtualization]]
guidelines|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting/tails_does_not_start]].
...@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ You can have a look at: ...@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ You can have a look at:
<p>If you are facing an error in Tails, please follow the [[bug reporting <p>If you are facing an error in Tails, please follow the [[bug reporting
guidelines|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting]].</p> guidelines|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting]].</p>
<p>If Tails does not start, please see our specific reporting <p>If Tails does not start, please see our specific
[[guidelines|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting/tails_does_not_start]].</p> [[reporting guidelines|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting/tails_does_not_start]].</p>
</div> <!-- #bugs --> </div> <!-- #bugs -->
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...@@ -5,8 +5,9 @@ ...@@ -5,8 +5,9 @@
Problems starting Tails Problems starting Tails
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This page lists knows problems with specific material. You should This section lists known problems with specific hardware. To report a problem
read also our [[general guidelines about problems at boot time|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting/tails_does_not_start]]. with different hardware see our [[report guidelines when Tails does not
start|doc/first_steps/bug_reporting/tails_does_not_start]].
Acer Travelmate 8573T-254G50M Acer Travelmate 8573T-254G50M
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