Commit cbd4e99f authored by sajolida's avatar sajolida
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Improve phrasing

- Privacy is more vague than surveillance
- Be shorter
- Be more consistent with the phrasing of our mission
- Simplify syntax by removing a verb
parent abaf7200
...@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ document.addEventListener('DOMContentLoaded', function() { ...@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ document.addEventListener('DOMContentLoaded', function() {
<h1 class="sentence"> <h1 class="sentence">
<span class="hero-tails">Tails</span><br/> <span class="hero-tails">Tails</span><br/>
is a portable operating system<br class="optional"/> is a portable operating system<br class="optional"/>
that protects your privacy<br class="optional"/> that protects against<br class="optional"/>
and helps you avoid censorship. surveillance and censorship.
</h1> </h1>
</div> </div>
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