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@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ considered safe to use in this context.
 
 <div class="next">
   <ul>
-    <li>[[Warnings about persistence|doc/first_steps/persistence/warnings#index3h1]]</li>
+    <li>[[Warnings about the Persistent Storage|doc/first_steps/persistence/warnings#index3h1]]</li>
     <li>[[Browsing the web with <span class="application">Tor Browser</span>|doc/anonymous_internet/Tor_browser]]</li>
     <li>[[Can I hide the fact that I am using Tails?|doc/about/fingerprint/]]</li>
   </ul>
@@ -312,8 +312,8 @@ Tails does not include a Java plugin in its browser because it could break your
 
 <a id="persistence"></a>
 
-Persistence
-===========
+Persistent Storage
+==================
 
 <a id="persistent_features"></a>
 
@@ -324,21 +324,20 @@ Can I save my custom settings?
 browser settings, touchpad preferences, etc.</em>
 
 By default Tails does not save anything from one working session to another.
-Only the persistent volume allows you to reuse data across different working
-sessions. See the list of existing [[persistent
-features|doc/first_steps/persistence/configure#features]].
+Only the Persistent Storage allows you to reuse data across different working
+sessions. See the list of existing [[features of the Persistent Storage|doc/first_steps/persistence/configure#features]].
 
-We are frequently requested to add new persistent features but we are usually
+We are frequently requested to add new features to the Persistent Storage but we are usually
 busy working on other priorities. See our [open
 tickets](https://redmine.tails.boum.org/code/projects/tails/issues?query_id=122)
-about persistence. Any bit of help [[is welcome|contribute/how/code]].
+about the Persistent Storage. Any bit of help [[is welcome|contribute/how/code]].
 
 <a id="luks"></a>
 
-How strong is the encryption of the persistent volume and LUKS?
+How strong is the encryption of the Persistent Storage and LUKS?
 ---------------------------------------------------------------
 
-Tails uses LUKS to encrypt the persistent volume. This is the same technique as
+Tails uses LUKS to encrypt the Persistent Storage. This is the same technique as
 the one we recommend for [[creating and using encrypted
 volumes|doc/encryption_and_privacy/encrypted_volumes]] in general.
 
@@ -346,19 +345,19 @@ LUKS is a very popular standard for disk encryption in Linux. LUKS is the
 default technique for full-disk encryption proposed by many distributions,
 including Debian and Ubuntu, when installing a regular system.
 
-The persistent volume is created with the default LUKS parameters used
+The Persistent Storage is created with the default LUKS parameters used
 by `udisks` and `cryptsetup`.
 
-To understand better how persistence works, see our [[design
+To understand better how the Persistent Storage works, see our [[design
 document|contribute/design/persistence]].
 
 <a id="recover_passphrase"></a>
 
-Is it possible to recover the passphrase of the persistent volume?
-------------------------------------------------------------------
+Is it possible to recover the passphrase of the Persistent Storage?
+-------------------------------------------------------------------
 
-No. The encryption of the persistent volume is very strong and it is not
-possible to recover the passphrase of the persistent volume. If the passphrase
+No. The encryption of the Persistent Storage is very strong and it is not
+possible to recover the passphrase of the Persistent Storage. If the passphrase
 is weak enough, an attacker, using a brute force attack, could try many
 possible passphrases and end up guessing your passphrase.
 
@@ -519,9 +518,9 @@ proposal on [[tails-dev@boum.org|about/contact#tails-dev]].
 <div class="tip">
 
 If a software is not included in Tails, but is included in Debian, you can use
-the [[additional
-software|doc/first_steps/persistence/configure#additional_software]] feature of
-the persistent volume to install it automatically at the beginning of each
+the [[Additional
+Software|doc/first_steps/persistence/configure#additional_software]] feature of
+the Persistent Storage to install it automatically at the beginning of each
 working session.
 
 </div>

wiki/src/support/known_issues.mdwn

@@ -567,24 +567,24 @@ Sometimes, after an automatic upgrade, your Tails might either:
 To fix this problem, you can [[update your Tails
 manually|doc/upgrade/#manual]].
 
-Note that your Persistent Volume will be safely preserved.
+Note that your Persistent Storage will be safely preserved.
 
 <a id="persistence-disappears"></a>
 
-Persistent folder disappears and persistent feature configurations do not load
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
+<em>Persistent</em> folder and other data from the Persistent Storage disappear
+-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 Sometimes, the <span class="filename">Persistent</span> folder is missing and
-the configurations for persistent features do not load.
+all the data of the Persistent Storage is unavailable.
 
 Most likely this means that the <span class="filename">persistence.conf</span>
 file has disappeared. However, the files in the
-<span class="filename">Persistent</span> folder and the persistent feature
-configurations should still be saved.
+<span class="filename">Persistent</span> folder and all the other data in the Persistent Storage
+should still be saved.
 
 If you encounter this problem:
 
-1. Enable your encrypted persistent storage in
+1. Unlock the Persistent Storage in
    the Welcome Screen when you start Tails.
 
 1. Choose
@@ -594,14 +594,14 @@ If you encounter this problem:
      <span class="guimenuitem">Configure persistent volume</span></span>.
 
 1. If you are asked to enter a passphrase, enter the same passphrase that you
-   used to unlock your persistent storage.
+   used to unlock your Persistent Storage.
 
-1. Select the persistent features that you had activated previously.
+1. Turn on the features of the Persistent Storage that you had turned on previously.
 
 1. Click <span class="button">Save</span>, then restart Tails.
 
-Your <span class="filename">Persistent</span> folder and persistent feature
-configurations should be restored.
+Your <span class="filename">Persistent</span> folder and all the data of the Persistent Storage
+should be restored.
 
 If the above instructions do not fix the problem, you might need to fix the
 ownership of TailsData_unlocked.
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ Affected language codes are `AYC`, `BHB`, `BRX`, `CMN`, `HAK`, `HNE`, `LIJ`,
 Last updated: 2018-01-15
 -->
 
-This happens when one has enabled the GnuPG persistence feature before
+This happens when the GnuPG feature of the Persistent Storage was turned on before
 Tails 2.3. To fix this problem, execute the following command in
 a
 [[terminal|doc/first_steps/introduction_to_gnome_and_the_tails_desktop#terminal]]: