Improve 'Communications' sections

wiki/src/blueprint/personas.mdwn

@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ developed by SecondMuse):
 
 - **Communications**
 
-  - Support groups online: forums, websites
+  - Online support groups: forums, websites
   - Known peers: chat, email
   - Unknown peers: chat, email, forums
   - Psychologist online: forums, websites
@@ -384,6 +384,10 @@ developed by SecondMuse):
 
 - **Communications**
 
+  - Local interviewees: leaking platform, mobile phone messaging
+  - Journalistic partners: emails, mobile phone messaging
+  - Publication: websites, cloud storage
+
 - **Goals**
 
   A.  I want to hide personally identifying information or sensitive information about myself
@@ -431,7 +435,7 @@ developed by SecondMuse):
     need to send out strategic information to the press and to the
     public so that citizens actually know where to show up. In order to
     publish this information they use websites which are not in the
-    country, so that the government cannot censor this information.
+    country, so that the government cannot shut them down.
   - During the protest they leave their phones at home. They are doing
     most of their communication beforehand. Although they take photos
     and videos of the protests and try to publish this information on
@@ -458,8 +462,8 @@ developed by SecondMuse):
 
 - **Communications**
 
-  - Local group chat
-  - Encrypted emails
+  - Internal communications: chat, encrypted emails
+  - External communications: censored websites
 
 - **Goals**
 
@@ -529,8 +533,8 @@ developed by SecondMuse):
 
 - **Communications**
 
-  - To contribute to free software: encrypted and unencrypted emails and chat
-  - To organizing digital security trainings: smart phone messaging apps
+  - Free software contribution: encrypted and unencrypted emails and chat
+  - Organizing digital security trainings: smart phone messaging apps
 
 - **Goals**