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wiki/src/install/inc/steps/pc_boot_menu.inline.html

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ model of the computer:</p>
 work fine.</li>
 <li>On some computers, you might have to do more advanced techniques,
 like editing the BIOS settings.</li>
-<li>On few computers, it might currently be impossible to start Tails
-but it's very hard to know without trying.</li>
+<li>On a few computers, it might currently be impossible to start Tails.
+But, it is very hard to know without trying.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>The goal is to reach the <span class="application">Boot Loader
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Menu</span> of Tails:</p>
 
 <div class="next">
 
-<p>After you reached the <span class="application">Boot Loader Menu</span>, you
+<p>After you reach the <span class="application">Boot Loader Menu</span>, you
 can skip the rest of this section and <a href="#greeter">wait until
 <span class="application">Tails Greeter</span> appears</a>.</p>
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ can skip the rest of this section and <a href="#greeter">wait until
 <p>On most computers, you can press a <em>boot menu key</em> to display
 a list of possible devices to start from. The following instructions
 explain how to display the boot menu and start on the USB stick. The
-following screenshot is an example of such boot menu:</p>
+following screenshot is an example of a boot menu:</p>
 
 <p>[[!img install/inc/screenshots/bios_boot_menu.png link="no" alt=""]]</p>
 
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ in our [[list of known issues|support/known_issues]].</p>
 
 <h3 id="bios-settings">Edit the BIOS settings</h3>
 
-<p>If none of the possible boot menu keys from the previous technique work or if
+<p>If none of the possible boot menu keys from the previous technique work, or if
 the USB stick does not appear in the boot menu, you might need to edit your BIOS
 settings.</p>
 
@@ -131,8 +131,8 @@ restart the computer after each change. Some changes might not
 apply to certain computer models.</p>
 
 <div class="caution">
-<p>Take note of the changes that you apply to the BIOS settings, to be
-able to revert them if they prevent the computer to start on its usual
+<p>Take note of the changes that you apply to the BIOS settings. That way, you
+can revert the changes if they prevent the computer from starting on its usual
 operating system.</p>
 </div>
 
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ operating system.</p>
    <p>Edit the <strong>Boot Order</strong>. Depending on the computer model you might
    see an entry for <strong>removable devices</strong> or <strong>USB media</strong>. Move this entry
    to the top of the list to force the computer to try to start from
-   the first USB stick before starting from the internal hard disk.</p>
+   the USB stick before starting from the internal hard disk.</p>
   </li>
 
   <li>
@@ -184,18 +184,18 @@ able to use Tails on this computer. Feel free to
 
   <li><p>How did you verify the USB image?</p></li>
 
-  <li><p>Which is the brand and model of the computer?</p></li>
+  <li><p>What is the brand and model of your computer?</p></li>
 
   <li><p>What exactly happens when trying to start? Report the complete error
       message that appears on the screen, if any.</p></li>
 
-  <li><p>Which program did you use to install your USB stick?</p></li>
+  <li><p>What program did you use to install your USB stick?</p></li>
 
-  <li><p>Have you been able to start Tails successfully on this computer
-      before, from another USB stick or DVD, or with another version of Tails?
-      If so, which ones?</p></li>
+  <li><p>Does the USB stick start successfully on other computers? If so,
+      what are the brands and models of those computers?</p></li>
 
-  <li>Does the same USB stick start successfully on other computers?</li>
+  <li><p>Have you been able to successfully start another version of Tails
+      on this computer before? If so, which version?</p></li>
 
 </ol>