Commit 980fa789 authored by sajolida's avatar sajolida
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Improve phrasing

  - Structure sentence
  - Avoid abbreviations as e.g.
  - Avoid 'should'
  - Avoid jargon such as 'whitelisted'
parent 8a572f79
...@@ -14,6 +14,6 @@ are listed in the [Changelog](https://git-tails.immerda.ch/tails/plain/debian/ch ...@@ -14,6 +14,6 @@ are listed in the [Changelog](https://git-tails.immerda.ch/tails/plain/debian/ch
* If MAC address spoofing fails on a network interface and * If MAC address spoofing fails on a network interface and
this interface cannot be disabled, then the networking is now this interface cannot be disabled, then the networking is now
completely disabled. completely disabled.
* If MAC address spoofing causes network issues (e.g. due to the * A notification is displayed if MAC address spoofing causes network
access point blocking all but whitelisted MAC addresses) a issues, for example if a network only allow connections from a
notification should now be properly displayed. list of authorized MAC addresses.
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