Improve the release notes and changelog a bit.

debian/changelog

@@ -4,25 +4,19 @@ tails (1.1) unstable; urgency=medium
     - Upgrade literally thousands of packages.
     - Migrate to GNOME3 fallback mode.
     - Install LibreOffice instead of OpenOffice.
-    - Install systemd. It is not enabled by default, but having it
-      around will help doing the migration work.
-    - Enable AppArmor on the kernel command-line. This is a no-op
-      without the userspace tools and with no profile shipped, but it
-      will make it easier to fix this part of the situation.
     - Remove custom LSB logging: Wheezy has fancy colored init
       logging.
 
   * Major new features
+    - UEFI boot support.
     - Replace the Windows XP camouflage with an experimental Windows 8
       camouflage.
-    - UEFI boot support.
-    - Install Linux 3.14 from Debian unstable.
+    - Install Linux 3.14.12-1 from Debian unstable.
     - Bring back VirtualBox guest modules, installed from Wheezy
       backports. Full functionality is only available when using the
       32-bit kernel.
 
   * Security fixes
-    - Upgrade Tor to 0.2.4.22.
     - Fix write access to boot medium via udisks (#6172).
     - Don't allow the desktop user to pass arguments to
       tails-upgrade-frontend (Closes: #7410).
@@ -82,7 +76,7 @@ tails (1.1) unstable; urgency=medium
 
   * Minor improvements
     - Install seahorse-nautilus, replacing seahorse-plugins (Closes #5516).
-    - Install hledger (custom backport, for now): our accountant needs this.
+    - Install hledger (custom backport, for now): our accountants need this.
     - Install stable Scribus instead of scribus-ng.
     - Install the printer driver for Epson Inkjet that use ESC/P-R.
     - Install the BookletImposer PDF imposition toolkit. It's tiny,
@@ -120,7 +114,7 @@ tails (1.1) unstable; urgency=medium
     - Include syslinux.exe for win32 in utils/win32/ on the ISO
       filesystem (Closes: #7425).
     - Tails Installer:
-      * Add consistent marigins in GUI.
+      * Add consistent margins in GUI.
       * Always reset the target drive's MBR, without asking for
         confirmation, after installing or upgrading.
       * Install the bootloader using the syslinux binary found on the
@@ -133,6 +127,11 @@ tails (1.1) unstable; urgency=medium
       (Closes: #7119).
     - Fix quick search in Tails Greeter's Other languages window
       (Closes: #5387).
+    - Install systemd. It is not enabled by default, but having it
+      around will help doing the migration work.
+    - Enable AppArmor on the kernel command-line. This is a no-op
+      without the userspace tools and with no profile shipped, but it
+      will make it easier to fix this part of the situation.
 
   * Build system
     - Bump Vagrant builder's memory for RAM builds. Wheezy requires

wiki/src/news/version_1.1.mdwn

@@ -19,27 +19,25 @@ Notable user-visible changes include:
     - Install LibreOffice instead of OpenOffice.
 
   * Major new features
-    - Replace the Windows XP camouflage with a Windows 8 camouflage.
     - UEFI boot support, which should make Tails boot on modern
-      hardware and Macs.
+      hardware and Mac computers.
+    - Replace the Windows XP camouflage with a Windows 8 camouflage.
     - Bring back VirtualBox guest modules, installed from Wheezy
       backports. Full functionality is only available when using the
       32-bit kernel.
 
   * Security fixes
-    - Upgrade Tor to 0.2.4.22.
     - Fix write access to boot medium via udisks ([[!tails_ticket 6172]]).
     - Upgrade the web browser to 24.7.0esr-0+tails1~bpo70+1
       (Firefox 24.7.0esr + Iceweasel patches + Torbrowser patches).
     - Upgrade to Linux 3.14.12-1 (fixes CVE-2014-4699).
+    - Make persistent file permissions safer ([[!tails_ticket 7443]]).
 
   * Bugfixes
-    - Revert back to browsing the offline documentation using
-      Iceweasel instead of Yelp (Closes: [[!tails_ticket 7390]],
-      [[!tails_ticket 7285]]).
+    - Fix quick search in Tails Greeter's Other languages window
+      (Closes: [[!tails_ticket 5387]])
 
   * Minor improvements
-    - Install stable Scribus instead of scribus-ng.
     - Don't install Gobby 0.4 anymore. Gobby 0.5 has been available in
       Debian since Squeeze, now is a good time to drop the obsolete
       0.4 implementation.
@@ -48,13 +46,9 @@ Notable user-visible changes include:
       enough memory available to check for upgrades" too often due to
       over-cautious memory requirements checked in the wrapper.
     - Whisperback now sanitizes attached logs better with respect to
-      DMI data, IPv6 addresses, and serial numbers (Closes
-      [[!tails_ticket 6797]], [[!tails_ticket 6798]],
-      [[!tails_ticket 6804]]).
-    - Enable double-clicking to pick entries in the language or
-      keyboard layout lists in Tails Greeter.
-    - Fix quick search in Tails Greeter's Other languages window
-      (Closes: [[!tails_ticket 5387]])
+      DMI data, IPv6 addresses, and serial numbers ([[!tails_ticket
+      6797]], [[!tails_ticket 6798]], [[!tails_ticket 6804]]).
+    - Install the BookletImposer PDF imposition toolkit.
 
 See the [online
 Changelog](https://git-tails.immerda.ch/tails/plain/debian/changelog)