Commit 8d79c7e1 authored by sajolida's avatar sajolida
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Improve templates

parent 49af892b
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- Use full sentences for major changes ("*We installed*", "*You can*")
- Use present tense without subject for minor changes ("*Upgrade*", "*Fix*")
- Mention updates as "Update *Xyz* to [1.2.4]."
- Mention previous version if we skipped some "Update Xyz from 1.0.0 to [1.2.3]."
- Mention previous version if we skipped some "Update *Xyz* from 1.0.0 to [1.2.3]."
- Link to release notes if any, or changelog
- For Linux upgrades add "*This should improve the support for newer hardware (graphics, Wi-Fi, etc.)*"
- Order items to put the most visible, less technical, and most popular
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......@@ -6,16 +6,12 @@
<!--
This release fixes [[many security
vulnerabilities|security/Numerous_security_holes_in_$VERSION-1]].
You should upgrade as soon as possible.
vulnerabilities|security/Numerous_security_holes_in_$VERSION-1]]. You should upgrade as soon as possible.
OR
This release is an emergency release to fix a [[critical security
vulnerability in $APPLICATION|security/Numerous_security_holes_in_$VERSION-1.
You should upgrade as soon as possible.
vulnerability in $APPLICATION|security/Numerous_security_holes_in_$VERSION-1. You should upgrade as soon as possible.
-->
......@@ -31,6 +27,13 @@ You should upgrade as soon as possible.
### Included software
- Update *Xyz* to [1.2.3].
- Update *Xyz* from 1.0.0 to [1.2.3].
- Update Linux to 1.2.3. This should improve the support for newer
hardware (graphics, Wi-Fi, etc.).
### Hardware support
The following updates make Tails work better on recent hardware (graphics,
......@@ -63,7 +66,10 @@ See the list of [[long-standing issues|support/known_issues]].
If you cannot do an automatic upgrade or if Tails fails to start after an
automatic upgrade, please try to do a [[manual upgrade|upgrade]].
- [[Download Tails $VERSION.|install/download]]
- Download Tails $VERSION:
- [[For USB sticks (USB image)|install/download]]
- [[For DVDs and virtual machines (ISO image)|install/download-iso]]
# What's coming up?
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