Improve phrasing

- Avoid ambiguous 'it' - Avoid 'should'

Improve phrasing
- Avoid ambiguous 'it' - Avoid 'should'
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Commit 8a572f79 authored Sep 21, 2015 by sajolida
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@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ are listed in the [Changelog](https://git-tails.immerda.ch/tails/plain/debian/ch
 ## Fixed problems

  - Fix several issues related to *MAC address spoofing*:
-    * If MAC address spoofing fails for some network interface *and*
-      it cannot be disabled afterwards, networking should now be
+    * If MAC address spoofing fails on a network interface and
+      this interface cannot be disabled, then the networking is now
      completely disabled.
    * If MAC address spoofing causes network issues (e.g. due to the
      access point blocking all but whitelisted MAC addresses) a