From 851fb31872205d5a60d741870dadafa9cc133ae7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: sajolida <sajolida@pimienta.org>
Date: Sat, 10 Jun 2017 11:01:42 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Shorten and unify

- "Individual" as an adjective can mean "Existing as a distinct entity; separate"
- Ikiwiki links work without / at the end and we never put them
---
 wiki/src/doc/about/finances.mdwn | 6 +++---
 wiki/src/donate.html             | 2 +-
 wiki/src/index.html              | 4 ++--
 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/wiki/src/doc/about/finances.mdwn b/wiki/src/doc/about/finances.mdwn
index f24f8338d5..ae18ec921e 100644
--- a/wiki/src/doc/about/finances.mdwn
+++ b/wiki/src/doc/about/finances.mdwn
@@ -218,6 +218,6 @@ Income statement for 2010
 Partners
 ========
 
-Grants, awards, corporate donations as well as substantial individual
-donations that the Tails project has received are listed in a more
-visual way on our [[partners page|partners/]].
+Grants, awards, corporate donations, and substantial
+donations from individuals are listed in a more
+visual way on our [[partners page|partners]].
diff --git a/wiki/src/donate.html b/wiki/src/donate.html
index f1df69f607..35dedc17e4 100644
--- a/wiki/src/donate.html
+++ b/wiki/src/donate.html
@@ -382,6 +382,6 @@ permitted by law.</strong></p>
 <div id="meet-partner" class="row">
     <div class="col-md-12">
         <h3>Our partners</h3>
-        <p>Tails also receives grants, awards, corporate donations as well as substantial individual donations. Meet our [[partners|partners/]] or [[become one of them|partners/become/]]!</p>
+        <p>Tails receives grants, awards, corporate donations, and substantial donations from individuals. Meet our [[partners|partners]] or [[become a partner|partners/become]]!</p>
     </div>
 </div>
diff --git a/wiki/src/index.html b/wiki/src/index.html
index 20a0033f3a..b41e7b42d5 100644
--- a/wiki/src/index.html
+++ b/wiki/src/index.html
@@ -82,6 +82,6 @@ It aims at preserving your <strong>privacy</strong> and
 
 <div id="home-partners" class="home-section">
 	<h1>Partners & Grants</h1>
-	<p>Tails has received many donations and grants from its' partners: corporations, organizations and individual donors.<br />
-	[[Meet our partners|partners/]] or [[become a partner|partners/become]] yourself!</p>
+	<p>Tails receives grants, corporate donations, and substantial donations from individuals.<br />
+	[[Meet our partners|partners]] or [[become a partner|partners/become]]!</p>
 </div>
-- 
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