Commit 614a56c3 authored by sajolida's avatar sajolida

Add feedback from P9, P10, P11, and P12

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P7: coworking-tent le parece rebuscada
P7: Would put the computer inside the tent
P9: Likes better the laptop inside the tent, the others feel like you have to hide (vs. security should be normal)
P7: [DONE] Does not understand the USB tent
P8: [DONE] Doesn't understand the USB tent
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P5: "Run it on someone else's device" are they logged out? will they lose data when I plug it in?
P8: Thinks that Tails works from a different partition
P9: Is not sure about where you install it
P9: Would visit "Download and install" to understand better how to install it
P11: It's talking about a Tails USB stick but how do I get one?
P11: Unclear about whether it's a chat application, a search tool or taking your computer completely
P6: [DONE] Stumble on "somone else's computer"
P8: [DONE] Has a hard time understand how to use Tails on a computer
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[[!img amnesia.png link="no" alt=""]]
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P9: El único que se acuerda es el buho
P10: Rolling the tent could be anything. The other is more clear.
P11: Maybe the owl is a spy
P11: Roll is about leaving, tent is about preparing
P11: Roll is unclear about what it is: sleeping bag?
P12: Thinks that the guy is putting up the tent
P12: Likes both: 1st is clearer about being empty but 2nd is easier to understand
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<i class="metaphor">Like a tent, Tails always starts empty and leaves no trace when you leave.</i>
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XX: Add some reference between the backpack and the tent: tent in the background
P9: Doesn't like the big safe
P11: Prefers the backpack with chains because the backpack is your stuff and it is safe
The lock with key is too much about the key and not about your stuff
Keep it away. Don't touch it!
P12: The key means that it is well closed
P12: Prefers 2nd because it's more clear that it's my backpack
P12: Doesn't like the big safe
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<i class="metaphor">Like a backpack, you can store your personal things in your Persistence
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P6: Understands Persistence from the description but cannot relate it to the term
P8: Wonders about "Persistence" and think that it's a tool
P6: I don't understand this concept of "persistent encryption" (in Spanish)
(after reading the description) You can save some of your stuff is a "storage" (in English) or something like that
Me: So what does "Persistencia" mean to you? I don't know. (even after saying that it's a kind of storage)
P7: (after reading the description) I'm not sure what this means: is it a program? an online server? or saving stuff to the USB?
P8: (after reading the description) This is not clear to me. Persistence: I understand that it's a tool
When prompted, understand the relationship between Amnesia and Persistence
P9: (only shown the title) Everything you do will be saved encrypted
Persistence sounds to me like trying to encrypt over and over again
P10: (only shown the title) You need some kind of key to be able to use Tor and everything else
Persistence is something that stays, a data that sticks with time
(shown the description) It's an algorithm for encryption with which you can save some of your stuff
P12: (only shown the title) At first, thinks that everything is encrypted
Persistence means "during a lot of time" or "very strong"
Thinks that you can decide to encrypt the whole USB stick or not
Sounds like a system of very strong passwords to make it even stronger to open your Tails
Would call it "top security encryption"
(shown "Encrypted Persistent Storage" instead) "storage" are things that you save
It's like a suitcase that stays forever
P2: [WORK] Persistence: assume it's on the USB stick
P3: [WORK] **Persistence with capital P, must be the noun of a tool**
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P10: Stumbles on 'ready-to-use'
P3: [DONE] "Sensitive documents": personal, office, id card
P3: [DONE] "Sometimes you see a swiss knife and you don't know how it works"
P3: [DONE] "Out-of-the-box": jargon
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[[!img tor.png link="no" alt=""]]
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P9: Le gusta más sin números
P10: Finds the bear funny
P10: Likes the bear that represents threats
P11: Likes the eyes better than the bear: all the eyes trying to spy on you but they can't
P12: Gets that the image represents the Tor relays with the one with the tent, not so much with the bear
P12: Likes better the one with numbers
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[[!img surveillance.png link="no" alt=""]]
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P9: Would prefer the version with eyes
P9: Doesn't like people hiding in tents
P9: Los ojos dan un poco de miedo
P10: Wonders whether the owl is Batman
P11: The owl is fine here because it's watching, also with the other eyes in the bush
P12: The card could be intercepted. The phone line could be cut.
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P7: verify-tree.png Says that he doesn't have the skills to verify himself
P9: No habia visto la tienda en el microscopio
P9: Like the microscope better: bigger, more scientific, etc.
P10: Wonders whether it's open source
P11: Thinks it's a drawing for how to put up a tent
P11: Doesn't relate the study with trust
P11: Like better the one in the bottom because it's a person studying the tent
P12: Doesn't like the microscope because it's outside of the universe
P12: Like to see the person watching the plans
P6: [DONE] verify-tree.png Thinks that the watchers are looking the tree grow
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[[!img free.png link="no" alt=""]]
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P9: Estas seguro y de gratis cuando estas en la montaña
P9: Prefers the fire over the gift because it's not a material good
P10: Doesn't really understand. There might be threat to the campfire: rain, etc.
P11: After doing your stuff you are save and relax with your friends
P11: Doesn't cost anything and you are safe and free in your life
P11: Prefer fire because it's more human, not a material thing
P12: Fire is more about sharing but also about sharing free things, lacks something about security
P12: Gift tent is not suited for "top security"
P12: Proposes to have more contact and strength among the group
P8: [DONE] Finds more meaning in tent-gift over bee
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P8: tree means strength and roots
P8: Prefers tree because it's strong
P9: Likes the trees and their strength. Feels the "sharing" but cannot explain why.
P9: Prefers the trees over the fire for sharing
P10: Would add bridges between the trees
P10: Wonders whether sharing with projects with different goals would weaken the project
P10: Understands the network in trees but prefers campfire for sharing
P10: "El que esta debajo de un arbol se moja 2 veces"
P11: The roots represent underground networking
P11: Preferes the trees because it's about networking (underground)
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P4: Does Tails sell the USB stick? Can I use any USB stick?
P5: Can you run your own software on this USB stick?
P5: Is it like Ubuntu?
P9: Lo puedes usar en Windows o en Mac. No vi que funcione también para Linux.
P9: Didn't realize that Tails was an operating system
P1: [DONE] Install Tails on a USB stick and run it on any computer instead of STARTING ON Windows or macOS
P5: [DONE] "Instead of Win/mac" [had to be read twice, sentence structure] reads to them like Tails **only** works with Linux
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P6: At first, didn't see the guy walking away from the city
P10: Add mobile phone signal
P11: This is like Google
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<h3>Avoid surveillance, censorship, advertising, and viruses</h3>
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[[!img anywhere.png link="no" alt=""]]
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P10: Would prefer a more robust place than a tent: a bunker!
P11: Tails is like being alone and secure
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<h3>Your secure computer anywhere</h3>
<p>To use Tails, shutdown the computer and start on your Tails USB
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P6: Thinks that the telephone is tapped by the walkie-talkie
P8: Thinks that the telephone is tapped by the walkie-talkie
P10: Doesn't see much relation with the picture because displayed tools are not digital
P10: Camping kit transmits more independence and autonomy. La seguridad te la vas a proporcionar tu.
P10: Exploration kit son más cosas aisladas. Camping kit es más coecionada: funciono de esta manera
P11: It's about hiking. You are hard to follow and find
P12: Prefiere la primera porque son herramientas de comunicacion
P12: The camping kit doesn't seem related so much to the topic
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<h3>Digital security toolbox</h3>
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[[!img gift-heart.png link="no" alt=""]]
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P9: Likes the heart better, made with love. Doesn't like always relating to money. Without heart is less cheesy.
P10: Prefers with price because it's the most obvious.
P10: Gets the lace but wonders whether it's clear
P10: Likes better with the heart than without because it carries more message of allowing people to escape the commercialization of data
P12: Thinks that "Free Software" is "the normal stuff" (not Tails)
P12: Camping kit feels more like you are going to stay for a bit longer
P12: The price tag feels like it's a something pricee, also because of the lines
P12: Likes better the 1st one because it's not only about the price but also care and safety
P6: [DONE] Thinks that the blueprint represents the act of coding.
P7: [DONE] Thinks that the blueprint represents non-recreational software.
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P4: The free software box is also slightly repetitive; maybe just add "free software" to the first sentence?
P5: [DONE] Who are independent researchers? Does it just mean everyone/all developers?
P9: Unclear about who are the 'security researchers', los desarrolladores de Tails?
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<p><span class="persona">Journalists and whistleblowers</span> use Tails to publish sensitive information
and travel to unsafe places.</p>
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P9: Doesn't know whistleblower
P12: Doesn't know whistleblower
P12: The journalist seems pissed of
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P1: [DONE] Quienes soís? Como sé yo que no soís el gobierno?
P5: [DONE] Maybe add something like... "Tails is used by ..."
P9: Wonders whether AccessNow is clickable
P12: Thinks that AccessNow is a call for action
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