Commit 5a974888 authored by sajolida's avatar sajolida
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Fix various phrasing issues

parent 57406974
......@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ Several projects expressed interest in reusing Tails to build different
live distributions, also called *derivatives*, to fulfill slightly
different goals.
Tails being free software this is not only possible be encouraged,
because the more people look and work on our code, the better it gets.
Tails being Free Software this is not only possible but encouraged,
because the more people look at our code and work on it, the better it gets.
Still, at this time we don't know of any Tails derivative.
Derivatives have been imagined to:
......@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Derivatives have been imagined to:
- Have custom branding or configuration (for example to provide default
bridges).
- Provide ISO images with less or different features (for example to
have a VPN instead of Tor or an ISO image smaller in size).
have a VPN instead of Tor or a smaller ISO image).
While creating custom ISO images of Tails is relatively easy, we believe
that maintaining custom ISO images on the long run is very complicated,
......@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ and for the following reasons:
to the other.
A derivative with custom ISO images would need a similar process and
infrastructure or otherwise break the automatic upgrades mechanism.
infrastructure or otherwise disable the automatic upgrades mechanism.
- We provide authenticated downloads through a custom browser extension
and an OpenPGP signing key well connected to the web-of-trust.
......@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ and for the following reasons:
similar mechanisms.
- The anonymity provided by Tor and Tails works by making everybody
looks the same, especially on the network. Derivatives should be
look the same, especially on the network. Derivatives should be
careful about not breaking this anonymity set or otherwise provide
less anonymity to both its users and Tails users.
......@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ and for the following reasons:
and hastily.
Still, some of the reasons to create Tails derivatives could be solved
by **relying our official ISO images** and customizing them at run time.
by **relying on our official ISO images** and customizing them at run time.
For example, derivatives could:
- Package specific applications in Debian to make them easier to use in
......@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ For example, derivatives could:
(additional software packages and persistent storage).
- Help us build in Tails other mechanisms that derivatives might need to
adapt Tails to their needs (for example to have persistent DConf
settings or APT sources).
settings or additional APT sources).
- Talk with us to see how we can adapt our ISO images and source code to
make them easier to reuse for derivatives.
- To include a piece of software into Tails, talk to us as early as
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