Commit 43e4046c authored by sajolida's avatar sajolida
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Reuse similar phrasing

- Say that upgrades are "security" upgrades
- Skip "persistent" until we're in the dedicated section for that
- Say "some of your" which transmits both that it's not about all
  documents automatically and that this is about some personal data.
parent 88a2e5db
......@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ stick using
<p>On
this temporary Tails you won't benefit from important features like
automatic upgrades or the possibility to create an encrypted persistent
storage to store some of your personal files.</p>
automatic security upgrades or the possibility to store some of your
documents and configuration in an encrypted storage.</p>
</div>
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......@@ -111,8 +111,8 @@ list on the bottom left of the screen. Click <span class="button">Login</span>.
install the final Tails on it.</p>
<p class="usb">It is important to install the final Tails as it allows
you to store your documents and configuration on the USB stick and
benefit from automatic security upgrades.</p>
you to store some of your documents and configuration on the USB stick
and benefit from automatic security upgrades.</p>
<p class="clone dvd">This was a first but important step! Now grab the <span class="clone">new</span> USB stick
on which you want to install Tails.</p>
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<p>Yeah, you are done installing Tails!</p>
<p>If you want to save some documents
<p>If you want to save some of your documents
and configuration in an encrypted storage on the <span class="usb">final</span><span class="clone">new</span> Tails USB stick, follow
our instructions until the end. Otherwise, have a look at our
<span class="install-clone">[[final recommendations|clone#recommendations]].</span>
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