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@@ -15,15 +15,14 @@ Security flaw when installing additional software in 2.9 and earlier
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-Right before we were about to release Tails 2.9 we learned about
-<a href='https://security-tracker.debian.org/tracker/CVE-2016-1252'>CVE-2016-1252</a>
-which is a critical security issue in APT, the package management
-system used by Tails, Debian, Ubuntu and others. Tails 2.9 is
-affected by this security issue.
+Right before releasing Tails 2.9, we learned about
+<a href='https://security-tracker.debian.org/tracker/CVE-2016-1252'>
+a critical security issue in APT</a>, the software packages
+system used by Tails and Debian.
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-To remain safe while using Tails 2.9, please:
+To remain safe while using Tails 2.9:
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@@ -40,7 +39,7 @@ do not use Tails' <i>Additional software packages</i> feature
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-Tails 2.9.1 will be released in the next few days and will contain a
+We will release Tails 2.9.1 the next few days with a
 fix for this issue.
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