Merge remote-tracking branch 'cbrownstein/web/16128-verification-on-page' into...

Merge remote-tracking branch 'cbrownstein/web/16128-verification-on-page' into web/16128-verification-on-page

wiki/src/news/verification_extension_deprecation.mdwn

@@ -10,12 +10,12 @@ similar JavaScript code that now runs directly on the page.
 This new verification procedure is:
 
 - Simpler and faster for first-time users
-- Compatible with more web browsers, for example with Edge and Safari
+- Compatible with more web browsers, for example, Edge and Safari
 - As secure as the *Tails Verification* extension
 
 From the logs on our website, it seems like only a minority of downloads are
-currently verified. We believe that this simplified verification procedure will
-increase a lot the number of verified downloads and the security of our users.
+currently being verified. We believe that this simplified verification procedure will
+greatly increase the number of downloads being verified and improve the security of our users.
 
 Users of the *Tails Verification* extension can safely remove it from their
 browser. They will be reminded to do so on the download page.
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The other 2 verification techniques are still available:
   signature.
 
 Special thanks to [Mike Meixler](https://www.meixler-tech.com/) who donated his
-time to helped us with the verification JavaScript!
+time to help us with the verification JavaScript!
 
 In the future, this simplification will allow us to further simplify the
 download page and installation instructions. We also want to research how to